"Mary Gazes At Her Hand"

“Mary Gazes At Her Hand” (c) 2009 Stu Jenks 

[Tuesday, November 3rd, 2009]

    It’s after dinner. Mary’s sound asleep. I wake her up. She’s happy to see me. I’ve been told that she has rallied.

    “We think it was the Depakote. She been off it five days now. We have to puree all of her food but she ate three meals today. I have to feed her, though. Then again, she may have had a little stroke...” Sounds like Jessica thinks she's getting better. I pray Mom’s not.

    I thank the caregiver as she leaves Mary and I alone. I close the door to her room. I reread her birthday cards to her. I read them to her first, on Halloween, but she was completely unaware of them, and me, that day. It was just four days ago. She turned 83. Tonight, she knows the names of her friends, at least for a few seconds or so.
    We talk and Mom hears me. Says a few words in response: “O, yes,” and an “O, my,” or two. “You got that right,” was the longest sentence she said all night. She can listen to what I’m saying and occasionally respond, but she can’t complete any of her own sentences. Where before she would get confused by the verb: “What I need to tell you is...” and then get lost, now, she gets lost in the first noun: “I, I, I, want...want...I...I...” and then she stops trying.
    “It’s OK, Mom,” I say, but it’s not. Not for her, who wants to speak to her son. Not for me, who wants to hear what she has to say.
    I finish with the cards. I talk about the new Hoop Dancing book that was printed last week, and she seems excited. I talk about how I thought she was close to death, last week.
    “Me, too.” she says.
    I talk about the girl in California, and how I know now there is no future for us. She seems sad and confused. She liked, when over the past few weeks, my eyes brightened when I spoke about the Woman on the West Coast. Mary’s reading my face now as much as she's hearing my voice. She sees I’m very sad. She’s sad too. And confused about what happened between me and the girl. I don’t go into many details. I’m a bit confused too, about how it all came down.
    I talk about how I don’t think she has a long time to live now.
    “No,” she says, not disagreeing with me.
    “Everything is taken care of. There is plenty of money for everything. Your funeral will be back in Virginia.”
    She smiles at that.
    “I heard you talking with Nannie, over the last few days,” I say.
    “Yes...”
    “Maybe she’ll come over from the other side and help you some,”
    “I hope so,” Mary says.
    I mention that I’m getting a fine wooden casket made for her ashes, like the one we had made for Dad. She nods.
    “I’m sorry this is so hard, Mom.”
    She rolls her eyes, saying nothing.
    I laugh out loud.
    “You think funny,” she says with the first big smile I’ve seen on her mouth in days.
    “Yea,” I say, “I’m laughing because you’re the one who's dying, not me. You have the hard job.” I laugh again.
    She smiles and gives a bit of a shrug.
    “I hope Stuart comes to help you too.”
    She looks away. She misses Dad.
    “I feel his presence sometimes,” I say.
    “Do you?” she asks.
    “Yea, I do. I hope he visits.”
    She just looks at me. With a ton of love in her eyes.
    “I love you, Mom, and I’ll love you after you’re gone.”
    “I’ll....love....” but that’s all she gets out.
    “You’ll love me too, after you’re gone.” I say, completing her thought.
    “Yes...”
    “Well, maybe I’ll feel your presence too, after you’ve died.”
    She seems surprised and slightly delighted by that idea.
    “I love you, Mom.”
    “I love you, too.”
    We talk for a bit more and then I say goodnight. I kiss her forehead, like I’ve done a hundred times before.
    “Give me a kiss,” I say as I put my cheek to her lips.
    She has a tough time tonight, brushing my cheek slightly with her lips. I back away.
    “Not...much...of...,” she quietly says.
    “Not much of a kiss? Well, try again,” placing my cheek again to her mouth. This time she makes firmer contact.
    “There, that was good,” I say. “I’ll see you tomorrow.”
    She smiles. I turn out her bed-stand lamp and walk to open her bedroom door. She’s a little spooked at first by the complete darkness but is quickly calmed by the ambient light from the hall.
    “It’s OK, Mom,” I say from the doorway.
    “Good night, Mom”
    “Good...,”
    And the rest just fades away.
    
    

Comments

[Ericha Scott]

Stu - when my husband was dying - I slept in his hospital room every night for three weeks. I had to sleep on a chair I called the "Venus Fly Trap" because if I wiggled a little bit it would fold up on me.

Nonetheless - it was well worth it. All of his monitors - heart, etc. - improved when I walked in the room - so whey the nurse suggested I stay - it was an easy choice.

Thank you for sharing your journey - it is so parallel to mine.

PS - I am trying to think of a way to buy a few of the HOOP DANCE photos - for Christmas gifts. Rather than pick them up in Tucson - I will need to have them shipped.

Blessings, Ericha